your work brings me joy every time. i'm really sorry to hear about your situation with mental health and college. i suppose if i had anything to recommend to "improve" your work, perhaps try out more extreme or just generally different/unusual poses? idk if that's the best recommendation, i guess i may add that i love your other works (like that LISA piece. that was phenomenal <3), so perhaps you can try experimenting with designs or tone with your works
either way, i'm always looking forward to your work. i hope nothing but the best for you, <3